All Comments on 'Ingenue'

I really liked it. Thank you

Wow, what a great story, great writing, unforgettable characters, unbelievable internal and external dialogue, and very believable sex scenes, for fiction. Paul's concern that Jess has so many orgasms and he only has one misses the mark. If a male had the ability to have a female have an orgasm, it would be a merit badge of honor, that assumes. of course, that a male can tell if his partner is climaxing. I also find it interesting that Jess would rather nurse the baby before Paul. To me, that's an odd form of love. Aside from these two issues, this story is really fun to read, entertaining, and sexy. Wonderful mother too.

Amazing writing. I could not put it down. You built up the excitement beautifully. Well done.

BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!

Awesome story! Looking forward to read the next 15 pages. She reminds me of an ex gf of mine, in so many ways.

what a story...! sucked me right in, and so many unique facets, not the least of them being her unusual ability to help out her sister... and breastgasms..and ability to have multiple

-and her very mature attitude/so confiding in her sis & mom "...I'm going to do him...' "...go for it!" and her pastor telling her to go for it too!/author's description of her fantastic teen body-great boobs AND muffin!/his ex's loving getting her back door stuffed/the natural pits, and him warming to them-always been a fan/if she can drink at 18 author's not a Yank/and if he's packing 8" puts him on par with the major smut talent/and her taking it all no prob her very first go

Woderful!

Supremely erotic, romantic and beautiful.