All Comments on 'Ingrams & Assoc 6: Downfall Ch. 03'

It gets interesting.

A well put together chapter in a series I never much cared for. As a rule, I hate lying manipulative bitches. This chapter reads like 3 scenes of a good action movie.

5*

I've followed this series from the beginning and love the detail. They always leave the readers wanting more.

How could you mess up the name of Ryan Dawson (the alias) and actually address Ryan as "Chris". How did HE not notice when you did. (Last episode and this) His crew called him Chris as well, and you never queried it, since he had been introduced to you as Ryan. Then all through-out the people, including you, used their Christian names but Chris/Ryan you always referred to as his surname, Morgan. Why? The devil is in the details and "Chris" would have picked up on this.

Looks like Jessica is up to her eyeballs in this as well. Eh???? Cheers.I've always enjoyed you writing.

Good chapter!

5

This really is very good. Despite my whingeing about the errors last time, it is well written, entertaining and quite gripping. Can't wait for next chapter. Thanks jezzaz.

A5!!

I've enjoyed many of your tales; but this is one of the best.

I keep waiting for new chapters

with segments such as .... " All the emergency vehicles had their flashers going, bathing the scene in decidedly blue pulsing hue," ... jezzaz creates a captivating story.

All I can say is ... more , please.

--- DK

To get the rest, right? Great story. Can’t wait?

Leonard Spencer is right. The name goof up completely destroys this story. Have to stop reading because I cannot take it seriously anymore.

I haven't been following this series but it's fast-paced. The writing is good and kept my interest.

Doing well, in a Mission Impossible kinda way.

But, ‘getting outta dodge.’ makes reference to Dodge, Kansas. Should be capitalized. Even if it were to be about exiting the Chrysler Corp. automobile, it would call for a capital.

That would be Dodge City, Kansas. If you want to pick nits........

Still rolling along very nicely.

Now I’m thinking that Jessica is deeper into this than April realizes. I&A wouldn’t find a guy and turn him over for execution. Jessica knew April would see Chris that afternoon, and informed the client, knowing they’d get Chris by following April. She knowingly put April in harm’s way, and knew the client had malicious intent.

Looks like I&A will have a meltdown of epic proportions.

April is losing track of her training and losing focus of her job.....twice now she could've been killed....they need to pull her out of active filed agent duty