All Comments on 'Ingrid Ch. 03'

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bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Lovely Story

Funny how everyone tells you treat 'em like ladies but some times they resent it. He did sound a bit stuffy there though. Thanks for smoothing it over. This was a truly fantastic first effort...

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
I'm enjoying this so much, The end was unexpected

Its hard to gage what shes thinking

GualterioGualterioabout 13 years ago
I am so enjoying this story!

It's late and I should be asleep but I'm going to try to get a few more chapters in!

Dubby49Dubby49over 11 years ago
Keeping on a track

In a cross wind and current (tide) the boat would drift to leeward even if the bow was pointed at a fixed object. The heading would keep changing. To maintain a track one must select two objects and keep them in a line adjusting heading as necessary.

Minor nitpicking in what is a fine story.

KarenEKarenEabout 9 years ago
Looking Good!

Still feel like I read this before, but just can't remember it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Losing me

He seems like a really decent guy. He should not be feeling bad about himself for the way she is treating him. She’s irritated by him for almost spoiling her day? What a bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like this story, but I don't understand why she was mad! The last section was confusing. Hopefully it will make more sense in the next chapter.

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

The Author omitted the boat type, judging from his details I’d guess it to be a Nauticat 37’ with earlier canoe stern, and yes I am a detail naus. 😉

Good story, but I want to kick his butt to get him into gear emotionally, not following cues from Women is not great for relationships.

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