by EightyThousandEightyFive
Nate needs some kind of revenge for the cheating I hate when writers do this in stories it just like it repeat Soul71 balance Stories well I get it’s fantasy just suggestion I think you a good plot
He should have taken the to a lawyer and sued the shit out the family. I'm sure the police would have been interested. At least a public shaming.
I hope he punches his sister in law in the face before he follows his daughter.
IDGAF what some trolls said about the first installment of this sequel. I loved it, and I love this one. This is very well written, has a great, if a bit odd, storyline, and wicked hot monkey sex. Between female family members no less! What more could one ask for in an erotic story? My one and only complaint is there is only one part left. Too bad there's not one hundred! 5/5!
Jedd
Tedious and I hate manipulation in any form. MC needs to leave and resurrect his self-respect.
Evah_Rheddy
Just one word can describt the trainwreck this one was 'fuck' the author at it best here, the grip the story gets on you, how it plunges you only onward toward the mess that it is, wonderfull 5 star for its genre and what it sets out to do.