All Comments on 'Inherited from My Aunt'

This is a trite story that seems a little contrived. You generally write better than this. The characters are underdeveloped and the ending is predictable.

short, sweet and a lovely story

A cut tale that was an enjoyable READ. I guess Anonymous thinks everything should be a literary masterpiece. Writing is supposed to be fun and enjoyable.

I Liked IT!!

They broke up. We are not really sure why and neither, it seems, are they. For some reason neither of them has a boy/girl friend or is married. They get together again and have sex. OK, both single in a cabin on a mountain together, why not. Now everything is fine. Why? As great as sex can be it's a poor foundation for a lasting relationship. They should have learned that the first time. They had great sex in the beginning of their first relationship and then it waned. As it did, their relationship broke up. Didn't they have enough other stuff that held them together to reeenergize their sex life? Apparently not. Do they now? Doesn't seem like it. Lonely people getting together for sex is not the basis to declare a reconciliation. It's a sweet story but I'm thinking "And in 6 months their sex life cooled off and they split up again". Maybe I'm just too cynical.

but can this divorce be saved, TK U MLJ LV NV