All Comments on 'Inhibitions out the Window Ch. 03'

A time coming but nicely done sir.

i really enjoy your writing not always the subject but the presentation is supurb thanks steve

I've spent some time now reading many of your stories. I'm really impressed by your inventiveness. So many different plots and characters. I've also noticed variety in your sex scenes, which seems to escape some otherwise good authors. Congratulations! You are really talented.

[Gualterio]

More lucky than he deserves -

Nice job -

What about this obsessed guy protecting the right to his property? Unbelievable that he'd abandon it. Just killed the story for me right there.

Now I'll finish and see if you redeem the effort.

Okay: story redeemed.

not sure what he wanted out of life.....he fights for his property to start with then just gives up late....why???

also yet another child found out he had years later.....happens too often...those lost years can never be got back....jumped about a bit but he got the woman he wanted in the end with his child.....

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Turns out to be a really good love story.

Nice tale. I enjoyed reading it.

FYI... it's eminent domain, not imminent domain.