by Comshaw
With the internet it's easy to gain knowledge of female anatomy. In your story he was seeking her anus or 'darkstar' or 'backdoor', etc. His fingers would have to be up inside her ass to feel her rectum having pushed her anus open. Here endith the lesson. Otherwise I enjoyed the story. Well written, keep going.
Great story with incest, love and sex, what else could we ask for, except another chapter. Nice buildup that's believable with great sex between them but it sure needs to be carried further. Thanks
Same story,over and over.
Well written, but no change
in the story. THANKS?
Great story. Noticed a few typos but not enough to detract from the heat coming off the screen. Well done!
But how does step sister qualify as incest??? Well it's NOT!!! How I would like this story develop is to turn it into a romantic true love story. NOT the shallow story it is.
A really great story with just enough detail but not too much to make it boring! Please write more!
Not really an incest story, they can legally marry. THAN is spelled with an A NOT!!! with an E. Learn the difference dummy.
Wonderful tale, but it needs more to make it complete. Maybe going forward you can have it become a passionate love affair then marriage. The possibilities are unlimited. Well done, 5 stars
Incest or not, it was a great story. Not too long, not too short, with love. Great place to stop, too.
Good premise.
Multiple sex scenes, but not enough -- not nearly enough -- details. OK. She gave him a blowjob. No specifics about it, really, except his cock was in her mouth, she deep throated him, and he came.
She couldn't use her hands, so how did she begin? Kissing it? Where? How?
Did she then lick it? Where? How?
Did she tease him? You don't say so. Did she ask him if he liked it while she was blowing him? Did she ask him if he was getting ready to cum? Did he want to cum?
And really nothing much with her breasts. Why no description of how he played with them? And what her reaction was? And what his reaction was?
So many opportunities not explored. Disappointing.
Four stars.
Nicely done. Enjoyed this story. It was well-paced and progressed in a way that didn't seem contrived.
Was a bit corny but good the same time, kinda reminded me of 40+ years ago when i lost mine, but to my mates sister, good times great memories :)