All Comments on 'Ink, Sex, Magic Pt. 05'

I love reading all chapters of this story. I would love to read more

That story was absolutely amazing...fantastic...the best!! I have read tons of stories,book etc.,and I can sincerely say that yours has no doubt been one of the best I have ever read. Your talent for this sort of writing(sci-fi/fantasy)has for exceeded any expectations I may have had. I can so easily imagine this becoming a printed novel,one that I would definitely purchase,as I'm sure would many others,with or without the explicit sex scenes. Thank you so much for writing and posting this surprising and most enjoyable tale! I would love to read more about these characters. I really appreciate the way you actually posted ALL of the story in a timely manner,as some authors can't always manage to do. You have a fan for sure(in case u couldn't tell lol)gave it 5 stars,Nikki P

You cant just end it there.

I've enjoyed reading this work of art! Too bad it has to end but leaving it open ended as you did... I'm guessing we can look forward to more of Alice's adventures, so to speak.

Incredible writing, twists, turns, nuances,subtleties, your writing keeps me on my toes. Your characters have depth, complex personalities, lustful, kinky desires. You keep us grasping for more. You are definitely a FAVORITE author, your story telling is so much richer, fuller, you just offer so much more than the typical Literotica writer. I notice your stories are complex enough that I pick up more wth a second reading. Please keep up the good work and keep writing for us.

Anon - well said, I can't improve on your comment. Alice is a special writer, one we see so seldomly on any literotica-type site. Thank you Alice for making your stories so rich.

Omg is it bad that the ending made me cry a little?!? This series was amazing I actually want to hear more and more it was intensely amazing and I love your your stories!!

What a cracking tale Alice I loved it, it is true that all good things must come to an end otherwise they would pass into oblivion. What we do know from life is that all good things will return and for that end I will wait patiently (or im ).

I simply love this novella....

wow wow wow wow wow!!!!

Really liked this story!

sorry i wasted all that time!

I loved this series so much

Loved this series! Read it multiple times and still go back to it from time to time! Please keep writing :)

Great job, thanks for sharing your work. I loved the story.

Excellent world building. The best world building except maybe The Afflicted on thus site.