by NeoShade
*smiles warmly*
Very interesting to find out one of the Muses is not only male but quite the villain. *grins* i looked forward to the next chapter. *winks*
can we get a character list please, since I keep confusing nikita and shesin.
I have no idea where your story is headed and I couldn't be happier. I wish there were more sex scenes, but I still love the story. I also think you should do a character list since the regular cast seems to keep growing. Thanks for the great story.
very good story. character development and continuity is fantastic. please find a new editor to review your spelling and syntax as it takes away from a very good read.
The average story on this site is a little one dimensional. I am very impressed. Your story has one of the best laid out plots so far that I have seen. You surpass many published novels I have read. I look forward to the continuation of the story. Hope we don't have to wait too long. Thank you, keep up the good work.
Hope ur okay can't wait to read more of this awesome story and mimic and any side stories I'm loving your work!
I read this as it came in and have been very glad to read it. Could you let us know if there is going to be any more? Have you been ill, if so I hope you get better soon. I really enjoyed this story so far and would be sad if it were not to continue but knowing would be better than not. Thanks in advance.
This could be a truly terrific story but you really need help with proofreading and editing.
I should have checked to see if this story was done before I started reading it :(
Not only do you insist we read through this dross, but you now do not finish the thing. It has been nearly four years since you last added to the story.
I suffered through the butchered dialogue and broken sentences. The story was good. Give it an ending.
I can't really wrap my head around the people, like the guy/gal earlier today that was being a dick to the author neoshade. When some entitled prick gets mouthy with me it always warms my heart to bend over backwards to grant their fondest desire. If you can't behave like a normal human being and say please and thank you, maybe you should just stfu. Please, and thank you.
Warmonger260 (cant be bothered to remember my password to log in)