All Comments on 'Innocence'

Hot! Delicious! Thanks!

It would be a crime to separate the two of them. They must have a spiritual connection that they don't know of. Poor Ryan is just a pawn in this connected souls and he will probably be used as a fuck toy. I do hope to read more of the erotic coupling of Ariel and Melanie. Thanks you so much for this good and well written story.....Rich

Is it Marie or Melanie? Make up your mind

About the names> Melanie is the sister married to Ryan which makes love to Ariel, Marie is the one with a girlfriend (owner of the house, where the events transpire, and of the charger).

Amazing story like the rest of them, I which there were more sequels to it and that the author would continue writing to fill the voids between some of the stories.

Thanks for writing this story. It was hot. I liked how Melanie was taking care of Ariel sort of. -stef