All Comments on 'Innocent Blood'

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barepussloverbarepussloverover 4 years ago
Loved It!

Very Well Written, Loved Ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just Missed the mark

It was a good premise, but I couldn’t get passed the blatant biological inaccuracies.

Like that’s not how a hymen works.... at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nicely done!

Well done, you! That was a fresh take on an old theme and I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it!

CharlottesFireCharlottesFireover 4 years ago
Enjoyed this

Yes I enjoyed this very much. The artistic liberties were not that bad at all.

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