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Click hereI barely heard Gabriella urgently ask something else, but I couldn't hear her now, my mind fading away entirely, a low growl the only sound rumbling in my ears.
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END OF BOOK 1
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Submitted: November 19, 2020 to Literotica (Copyright Kaizer Wolf)
Edited: August 11, 2021
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Anonymous6 months ago@KaizerWolf, it would feel a lot less awkward if this version just used her name more in those places instead of "best friend" and the like. It doesn't have to be a choice between 'sister' or 'best friend' for every occurance
KaizerWolfover 1 year agoAuthor@ricebert
In the taboo version of this story, also on Lit, she is his adoptive sister.
ricebertover 1 year agoI don’t like the way he and Serenity’s relationship is characterized. My dear friend is not believable, maybe sister like would be more believable.
Devilbobyover 1 year agoI think this is an important place in the story. Obviously the story goes on but are relevant MC still in place and able to take the story on.
Blacmamba0099over 1 year agoNot thrilled that Granby has turned into a demon like Kai hopefully it's short lived
Anonymousover 1 year ago@KaizerWolf
I too love your story, telling-ability/writing and fantasy. Really appreciate it, so please do not fall into the cave of overanalyzing, like the "Jackspeed2u"s types. All having their own opinion is great! just not focus (too much) on that. I will keep on enjoying your writing, the way YOU want to present it!. Brigths up my day and give me alot of "pleasure" :) Thanks!
Jackspeed2uover 1 year agoSo wasn’t Nick leaving? I believe Serenity said it three times and nick leaving was one of the reasons that the main guy (can’t remember his name and it’s hardly ever mentioned since he’s the point of view) could go to sleep instead of standing guard. Also nick was being booted because the three of them wanted to discuss themselves and the murder of the cop. Also has anyone pointed out that the main guy who doesn’t trust anyone because they get one chance and then fail, so Nick came to their house under false pretences then lied and interrogated everyone, then planted an illegal bug then bold faced accused him of murder of 4 people. So point is why is Nick even still tolerated? Oh and he led the arch murderers to the guy, serenity and their friend Gabriella. So Nick WTF is he even still there.
The shit is just falling appart, snowballing since Nick fucked it all up. So reset the circuit breaker. Ick fucks off to wherever he’s staying in his own car. The main guy, Gabriella and serenity all go to bed and sleep in whatever combination works for them. Then when the three wake up they have a brass tacks adult conversation, sex, sexualities, relationship types and what they will tolerate, and fucking honest complete feelings about each other. Then decide on some first blush decisions and then think on the heavy stuff with an exact time for the next meeting.
totostoryover 2 years ago@KaizerWolf
I love the story, writing style, even if I usually like 3rd person POV, but it is your style so write it as you like, anyway please inform us, are you planning to add the remaining chapters here or you`ll add them only on your patron ??
KaizerWolfover 2 years agoAuthor@NovaM
Really glad to hear you're enjoying the story!
You can check out more chapters on my Patreon at
Patreon.com/KaizerWolf
(The $2 Tier has access up to Ch 63 right now.)
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I'm also beginning to upload Character Art for the higher tiers.
