All Comments on 'Innocent Foot Rub Ch. 01'

Great writing. Your development of the characters and the timing leading to their interlude was excellent. The story flowed quite well. Not rushed but leads the reader developing a strong bond between characters. Not that this line has been crossed, perhaps with their frequent business travels together they might claim and explore new territory with a continuation of the story. Keep up the good work.

I agree with below. Timing is hard for me, and i felt you nailed it. Impressed. Keep writing !

in reality, it is just another fictional skank wife cheating - boring!

It belongs in lw.

Very well done, and great build up. There must be a part 2 describing the "claiming." I will be looking for it eagerly.

Fun premise, nice pacing, and realistic dialogue. These two justify a series.

This is a very well written story, with good characterizations, an unusual plot, and excellent grammar, punctuation and spelling. It bears the mark of good editing.

The erotic parts of the story are credible and exciting, and makes one want more of this tale. All in all, a fine effort and fully deserving of a five star rating. Do keep up the good work!

Traveling together twenty weeks a year.....you can see where this is going. Hope hubby finds out and neuters the pick and kicks the cheating slut to the curb.