All Comments on 'Innocent Invitation'

That was really imaginative and original! Thank you... spectacular story!

You are an exceptional storyteller. I love your way of entwining such emotion and, at the same time, lust into your stories. I am a romantic at heart and you have definitely "rubbed" those cobwebs away. Thank you

Excellent -well written, no spelling or grammatical errors and above all - extremely erotic!

this was a really good sex story i cummed so much n it felt so good

you should make another chapter ...that was great ...write about the growing love and sex of course lol that was great

I really thought this story was exceptional. I like most of your work but this was a bit special. Please ignore the people that ask for endless sequels. One of the best features of your writing is that you know how to finish a story.If something is left to the readers imagination - well good.

wow. so hot and sweet.

This story stands on its own merits but I would love to see you write more in this genre. The ending was sweet.

This story got me in way no other has. Its raw and sexy, and i felt every part of it. Keep these awesome stories coming. Oh man... Excellent.

Again, more brilliant writing. Wonderfully written with just the amount of tenderness needed

i loved it, more than words can say, u really have a knack 4 this keep it up, u dont need a sequal its fine the way it is, i wish my first time wud be like that thnx!!

I just reread "Wrath of a Writer" before coming over here to reread this. It's exceptional. I could *feel* the love.

beautiful, hot, and somehow haunting...i keep returning to read it again.

Very well written - wish it was longer - maybe you have the second chapter ready.

J

This story was great! I loved how you fit in the conflict. Please make another chapter!!!!

Love the characters, love the emotional element. Good writing and good sex; very tender and passionate but still HOT. Justine has the kind of moxy I wish I'd had at 20. LOL.

Very sexy story. Some of those who left comments said they'd like a sequel and some didn't. I'd vote for a follow on story, describing how their relationship deepened and they eventually fall in love, and their sex just gets better and better along the way.

This was an extremely well done story you've created. Your grammatical expertise is very obviously above the par of most on this site, while you're way with words really brings across the emotions and physical actions of these two characters. Even though this is an erotic short story, the way you've written it here wouldn't look out of place within a novel.

Very professionally done; I would recommend, if you have not already done so, trying to write a longer novella or even a full length novel. You have the skills to do so, as is plain.

Five stars from me. Excellent work, excellent work indeed.

Beautiful writing.Beautiful story.

I like the way you have brought the two together. The hurt Brendon felt & why was very real. Justine's desire for a man, not a boy, made the story interesting as well.

Nicely Done! 5*!

Very nice telling of an eternal truth—love is the ultimate balm for brokenness. 5 stars.

Sublime, soft, sensuous. Ang.

Wonderful, 10 stars! Maybe in a couple months she'll tell him, he's going to have another family; a wife and the twins his wife is carrying...