All Comments on 'Innocent Mom now Son's Slave Ch. 01'

This is my first story and I'm grateful & glad it got published. Please dont hesitate to leave any constructive feedback and comments. Thank you & Enjoy :)

Great start!! Well written

I love it

I think this slow start doesn't invite readers to keep reading, slow development fails to keep readers interest. Make it pop, make the son use his mom as his full time abused cum dump.

Excellent setup, plenty of foreboding, looking forward to developments

I actually like your dialogue technique, will come in handy for multiple characters with out " "Oh", she said " confusions

Perhaps just a light editing pass to catch a few little homonym problems; 'lead' for 'led' and so on

Easily earned ****

Some minor errors but not too distracting. A promising start.

An EXCELLENT setup chapter for what should be an interesting story. Some minor spelling and grammatical errors but nothing that interrupted the flow of the storyline.