All Comments on 'Innocent Passion'

by Zellewow

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tartan9tartan9over 13 years ago

I really liked your story and look forward to more chapters. I hope the demon is on Alys side it would be interesting to see how she copes with such an ally and she could exact revenge on her betrayer.

KaySerenityKaySerenityover 11 years ago
Looking foward…

To new chapters for this story! :) i hope she kicks ass for what she went through... Can't wait!!!

LiterKnightLiterKnightover 10 years ago
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That is a nice twist. I really hope you carry on with this, it's definitely interesting. I bet they weren't expecting that result though. Good work. Keep it up.

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