All Comments on 'Insatiable'

Could have been a *****

Great story until the end, then you ruined it. You could have thought up a better ending in line with the story. Now you make the father an asshole and took away the reasons for his earlier actions. Now he is just a perverted guy taking advantage of his daughters.

Yeah, you're right. Sorry. I wasn't happy with the ending but I wanted to get it done so I rushed it. I'll fix it and get it re-written ASAP. Thank you.

Decent story. Personally not a fan of anal but it was well written. 5*

How can you NOT be fan of... Never mind. I'm glad you liked it and thank you VERY much for the 5. I appreciate it.

i didn't make it past the first page before erupting into my own orgasm. so obviously, the ending is still eternal for me.

Jesus. And I thought I was a sick bastard.

Seriously though, I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for commenting. :)

Another great one thanks I will keep reading all of you excellent works now.

Thank you brownlab. I appreciate the support and I think you'll enjoy the other stories too. :)