All Comments on 'Insatiable'

I loved your story. Also very much that compliments make you cum! sweet! Gonna read your others now.

Another great story. There wasn't a damn thing wrong with your last story. I've come to hate the "Loving Wives" section. They cry too damn much. I really enjoyed this story too. Keep it up and you'll become a LIT heavyweight in the M/S genre IMO

Please catch the cheating husband and make him pay

husband needs to see a head doc. Take him to the cleaners...

yeppers, you have excellent writing skills, and a totally depraved kinky mind!… team that up with your Excellent storytelling abilities, and this is some hot fucking stuff you write...Keep it cumming… More please…Need more chapters in this saga...

I really cant put words down to respectfully give an opinion, all i can say it is will give me many dreams that will make my life a little better, my wife of 40 year passed 10 years ago so maybe someone will get what i am saying.

I enjoyed this one, nice work. Seems like it'll be a good week on literotica >: ]

Excellent story. I was hoping her husband would get his bimbo pregnant and have to fess up to her. 5 stars.

Not into kink, or your vanilla style of writing.

Infatuated with your writing style: Thought process stated <RETURN>; Next thought process <RETURN>. To some, it would seem confusing until you realize, this is excellence in execution. My hat, I doff, my pen and scroll I present for your artistic whim. 5* which is an insult to your art.

In the imortal words from Oliver, “More, please!”

Allows willing partner a guilt free experience. Similar to planned nakedness undervthe guise of an accident.I

So well written and gives insight to the most inner thoughts and desires of both "willing" participants .

I was so turned on reading this story I had to change my boxers from the precum leaking out. Thank you

While I liked the overall idea and flow of this story, it was hampered by poor spelling and grammar. My suggestion would be for the author to seek help from one of the Lit editors before publishing anything else. Having said that, the story itself DID make my cock rock hard!

Like the way it played out. Wish Mom and son were into stockings and heels.!!

Keep up the good work.

Those "Loving wives" people are a special bunch, aren't they. They seem to be very protective of that section

The folks in Loving Wives are an unusual bunch. Go to a place where cheating is specifically mentioned yet get all up in arms when a cheating wife isn't punished or worse, physically injured in some manner.

It's absolutely appalling.

This could’ve been a good story of a sexless mom except for your grammar and typos and the angle of a husband not fucking his wife because he’s religious, literally that’s the only time they get to fuck, should’ve just made him uninterested in sex, really makes it seem like a parody of erotica combined with your spelling

Don't worry about your Loving Wives entry. You'll find that the more you write over time the ratings will improve as newer fans start searching your back catalogue. For an erotica site people can be really needlessly cranky here.

As for this story, I really appreciate when the fever runs and the sweat drips. You're rich in description and it's almost as if you're as hypersexual as your mother character.

I thought it was perfect, the only thing i wish you did was kept the dad innocent

I really enjoyed the premise, the typos weren't too bad and more importantly the grammar wasn't distracting. I like how your vocabulary is good enough to be interesting but not so complex that it feels like shakespeare. I'm here to wank, after all. Gave you five stars! I'd love to see a story with even more of an emphasis on feet, but I'm gross like that.

I appreciate the pace and flow of this very erotic story. Great voice. Keep up the good work.

I enjoy the subject matter, I would have enjoyed experiencing this type of relationship.

But read it as it's in the April Fool's contest. Liked your writing style although could do with an edit before publication.

I enjoyed the story. These stories excite me, which is strange because I was never attracted to my own mother, or her type. But I have always fantasized about older women. I might have had a chance in college with one, but I messed it up.

Hot and Saucy!

It didn't need the bad dad but as he is a hypocrite I like it when they reunite and will have more illicit sex and taboo. From the perspective of a son it was an amazing story making me suspicious whars more to read from you. Thanks!

Good lord! Please write more.

Loved it! - off to read your other stories.

I liked the slow pace and great ending.

Very nicely done...

that is the second story of yours where a son has a foot fetish for his mother. So out with it lass🤣🤣

Impressive indeed. Thank you.

Great story. Wish I had put the long arm on my mom after dad passed, but I was busy with my family, and the thought didn't come up until after she passed and came to me in a dream and balled my eyes out. Then I realized I had wasted my life away without making love to the woman who wanted me to do it. I think sexy thoughts about it every day. BTW the son in your story is a perv, oh well. I'm a proud perv too.

This is the 1st story of yours that I have read. It was good. I understand the husband & wife aspect. I understand the mother and son aspect. I don't understand the son's foot fetish. Oh well, that's on me.

Like the other reader said the foot fetish is beyond me , the rest I loved even the two faced husband I understood , didn't like but I can understand .

Thanks for the read , 5*'s by the way

txcracker

really loved it , the delay was excruciatingly delectable ... nicely dragged out and foot fetish a nice aside ..

Love between a mother and her son is always beautiful and fucking together is even more, it is so great and intence.

i wish i was your son

I wish you were my mom.

You are SO GOOD at this! Great narrative writing combined with an artfully crafted plot line. Please write more!

Scott

Damn good story.. Thank you for writing and your time..5🌟

Loved the story telling, wish I were yiu again, lol!

Read this while at work dick hard as FUCK. Can't wait to go home to my gf and fuck her silly thinking of this until I cum. Thanks for the great story bae 😘

Favorite 5 stars.

5 stars

Loved this story it was easy to follow a mothers need for sex and she found it.

Loved it continue with more.

Brilliant. Came 4 times while reading this, twice without even touching my cock. Utterly brilliant.

Gave it 5 stars why don't you continue with more?

Well. If they make you cum. This really got me hot and bothered lol. I loved the bad girl turned good then back to bad. So hot and sexy. I had to ride my toyfriend.

Had me hard from beginning to end. Now to stroke myself off while reading the extra good bits

I am happy to say, I was as thoroughly transfixed by this story as much as your first. Your words paint a vivid image of lust and desire emanating from the mom. You do have a talent for the erotic flair.

The bible thumping husband reminds me of my preacher grandfather.

The hypocrisy of the christians {that cannot even agree on how to practice it} turned me away from it-- eventually ALL religions.

This one just seems cruel to the wife. It's like, she's starving, her husband is a locked fridge full of food, her son is a tasty piece of meat that only shows up when she's asleep and her mind believes it's poison thus she can't eat it anyway, and all other food tastes like shit with very no nutritional value, except the forbidden fruit. I can't blame her for what she did. Glad it worked out for her in the end.

And colour me surprised when the religious husband that is apparently getting no sex in his marriage ends up having an affair. Who could have seen that one coming? ;) I would have liked more details on that one though. When? With whom? How did it happen? And so on. Anyway, good story.