All Comments on 'Insatiable'

The guy below is an arse. Mine is amber. And the story is fucking awesome! Could we have a chapter two please?

This needs another few chapters.

I loved your descriptions of the orgasms and the bodily responses. The story was a little on the short side for me.

Excellent short story! And the reader wants to know what will happen next...

Nice beginning piece. Gives me inspiration to finish stories I'm working on. Thank you!

Looking forward to seeing more stories from you.

My feelings need little more than the mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm above.

I loved it and would like to read more. I shall e-mail in the hope we can find something between us, and I don't mean clothing!!!

Luv

Sammi

Wow, I loved it. It was erotic and eloquent. I appreciate the powerful albeit brief dialogue... The sexual/psychological impact of dialogue is so often neglected in the midst of all the fuckin' in most stories... a shame, to be sure.

anyway, it made me wet...