All Comments on 'Inside the Grotto'

It may be me but I really get annoyed with the use of 'they' for the singular and particularly where we know the sex of the 'they.' Why not write the last sentence as '... and he enjoyed the show' or replace the 'they' with 'clearly'?

Otherwise all rather pleasant. Perhaps a bit more build up and description of the special place would have helped.

Surprised when the story ended. Yet, it has enough to allow the reader to imagine the quickie. The voyeur is a wonderful addition, especially since the adventuress doesn't appear to be concerned.

This is a good introduction to a greater story, if you have it in you.

Thank you