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Kamattlockover 14 years agoIt was ok
The story was cute but the grammer was bad you shouldn't use plain in a sentence that requires the word plan. A proof reader would be a good idea.
Anonymousover 14 years agoToo rushed
Needed more substance toward the end... it was more anti-climactic; basically too rushed of an ending.
Funny that the person that suggested that it needed work on grammar couldn't spell it right.
Anonymousover 11 years agoNice Idea, Bad Execution
It was rushed. And the Aunt taking back her asshole ex was just stupid.
Anonymousover 10 years ago17
0 TO 1 IS FIRST YEAR OF LIFE
17 TO 18 IS EIGHTEENTH YEAR OF LIFE
HE WAS ONLY 17.
GET A GRIP
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