All Comments on 'Insurrection on Australis Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Great Idea! Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not a bad start.

But could you please put some clothes on your subjects. The cloths leave little to the imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Hope to read the next chapter soon.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderabout 6 years ago
Nicely done.

Really enjoyed this one.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderabout 6 years ago
"Theeerrreee we gooo"

I had to read this story again yesterday because this line "Theeerrreee we gooo" just kept popping into my head. I loved this story. reading it a second time I am so glad I gave you a five stars. I really would love to see this one continue.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Please Continue

I'm interested to see where this is going.

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On makeshift bedding in the cucumber garden, the hilltribe girl clings to her exhausted lover. Limbs still chaffing with pleasure, dissolving against him she now and again with one bare foot jostles a shell necklace that hangs from a vine on the fence - rattling it though th...