All Comments on 'Interdimensional Misadventures Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great start, 1, 3, 4 would be my preference for next

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

AWSOME!!! 1,3, is my vote as well,

4= Misadventure: have her teleport to a world nude, or leave her clothes in the previous world, etc.....

5= Misadventure: teleporting around tied up, in cuffs, etc.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story

1 Making sure she gets the amulet

3 Nothing too gross

4 Keep it lighthearted and fun

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 7 years ago
Niiice

Well, since you've asked. I'm rather partial to 3. Though admittedly 1 would be a good start and anon was right earlier, its still a mission, keep her... with a good work ethic alongside her play.

Otherwise, its your story, you're writing it, so do what inspires you Chao

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice story

I really like your story and your writing style. Keep the good workup.

2 and 3 are making me curious what you can deliver.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Three!

Honestly, my preference would've been two, but I can see three is getting the popular vote. So three!

de_grde_grover 7 years ago
maybe

She could tell him to try on the amulet and then disappear using her power. She could use that trick and save on fucking the orc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Loved it. I like the idea of continuing this story or the tentacle one.

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