All Comments on 'Interludes'

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Bridget69Bridget69almost 6 years ago
Just like foreplay

But where is the satisfying climax?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
and what now?

OK. Beginning is nice. Definitely. Well written. But something has to happen now. Otherwise, don`t put this story into this category if it has nothing to do with sex or anything. Really.

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