All Comments on 'Internet: First Date'

So real. More mature people should take chances. It can work out well as in this story

I read it over a dozen times making corrections after I finished, but still see too many typos, and I need to do better with "its" and "it's". Hopefully I'll get better as I write more stories.

You got the grown-up nerves dear right.

HP

They like each other and let them know it, melting into each other. I'm aroused.

it was great to read a story such as yours... it brought back memories from 27 years ago when my now wife and I met.. first date ended at my house and we did pretty much as you described. Needless to say she stayed that night and many nights after.. thanks for the memory

Real people doing what real people do, Thanks I enjoyed it.