All Comments on 'Intimacy'

With no indication of continuance, what was this? A glorified stroke? The words danced but?

The wife? Their relationship? Was she lesbian? Was she with his lovers partner? Not ever with his wife? Why was she mentioned at all then? An attempt at titillation?

A slice without taste - puzzling. Perhaps too much is expected - from the talent.

I liked the way you didn't hurry the story; but, let it take it's own time arriving at the points of erotica. I loved the leisurely pace. This story gives new meaning to 'up the river.'

Maybe when I'm old and gnarly (wait, I'm already old and gnarly ;), I'll be able to write as well as this.

You have my gratitude, thanks for a superbly told story,

--Alvaron

Reading was enjoyable and exciting. Plenty of surprises. Also many unresolved questions... it begs the question, is there more to the story?

Such a shame this has not been commented on in 17 years.

Quite good! Economical in pace and length, but full of the wonder of the beauty of ... women.

This author's account is active recently, and I hope my compliments are thrown into the void!

Five for you

I appreciate your comment. But ... it's why I wish more people would comment under their names (or nyms). Because we can't have a discussion. You'd probably never see any reply I might make. The curse of social media.