by ktmacks
I enjoyed this story. I wish the roommate had come home and found them fucking. It would be interesting to see his reaction.
Wow! You are a wonderful writer who painted fiery, intimate images in my mind that brought arousal and feelings of the kind of love we all need and look for in relationships! Thank you! Tell us more!
It is good to see a simple and good story as this.
However, I would have described the protagonist too. I mean, we don't know who he is and what is he like.
If this were a Reader Insert, that would he nice, but if you want to insert story, some descriptions are necesary.
All in all, I'll wait for the next.