All Comments on 'Into Dust'

So much love and affection made my eyes leak. Love your story though and certainly makes me think.

Wow! Incest isn't typically my thing (not against it, just not interested) but this story was just so well written and emotional and positive-yet-sad-yet positive that it was an instant favorite. thank you so much to the author for letting us read it.

I just have one problem with the story. 2 generations of inbreeding cant be healthy. And we are not talking cousins here but full on inbreeding.

Good story.

The plot, story line and the way you wove the past and present together were masterfully crafted. Now comes the but, saw quite a lot of errors, I'm giving you five stars in spite of the errors. You are a fabulous writer but even professional authors need proofreaders and editors. To soften my critique if there were zero errors I would gladly give you a billion stars. Beautiful story.

On her death bed she calls out "Tommy"... So Susan DID think of Albert as Tommy... sad way to live, thinking of your son as a fill in for Tommy, even when Al said he wasn't Tommy in the beginning.

I had to stop after the first page as that is almost exactly what happened to me. I lost my wife of 10 weeks to stage 4 lung cancer. We had gotten married on Christmas eve and she died Mar 8. Sold my house and moved to another state. Couldn't stay there anymore

Who’s chopping onions in here?

5 ⭐️

Fantastic story a tear was shed