All Comments on 'Into Her Touch'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great short story!

I really enjoyed it, but I'm also torn because I think this would good as a longer length piece. By that I don't mean beyond the end of this one, but taking more time to introduce and develop the characters and build up the momentum. I wanted to know more about them.

Having said that this was a great moment in time.

amber1312amber1312almost 13 years ago
beautiful

just beautiful, i hope there are going to be many more chapters to this.

loved it plain and simple

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12almost 13 years ago
awe****

Loved it to bits!

drmac100drmac100almost 13 years ago
Very good

Very god for something short and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WOW

That really was so so nice. I wish it was longer. Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

More please? Absolutely loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Amazing

Well-written, beautiful and really sexy. More please!

GimletEdgeGimletEdgealmost 13 years ago
An Impressionist vignette.

Lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OMG!

I've been looking for something like this- I'm far too lazy to write what I want to read- and this was just--it was fantastic!! PLEASE MORE!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Stolen...

I read an EXACT story that I bought from iBooks. Did you write that, or are you another person that likes to steal others work?

mapili50mapili50over 11 years ago
A sequel?

LOVED this! Any thoughts about a sequel? Would love to read how their relationship develops.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
WONDERFUL!

Best story I have read in a long time!

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