by XXNoraJeanXX
I like it a lot and looked over mistakes in spelling, thought it was a good erotic story.
Imaginative tale, well told. Something about the desire for over-heated sexual organs' need to get together for mutual pleasure is timeless...
Very believable story. One of the best gay stories I have read on here. Looking forward to your next story.
I am not one to comment on every story, but I had to say that this was great, well written, apart from the need of a little polish but I'm not one to judge too hard on that department, and refreshing too. A story like yours, you can't always find, and I appreciate the diving into the exploration of character, in addition you show a lot of potential to get better which raises my interest to see your next posts!