by Pioden
That's how to finish an erotic short story, with a twist so unexpected it is like a kick in the balls. Amazing set-up for the story as well. I'd like to read a prequel, if that makes sense
I did not see that coming. Ouch!
Apart from that, very well observed and persuasive. And the sinister figures closing in like Nazgul in the glade was a powerfully sinister image. Very dark, very well written.
Can you write lassie. Thank you for an amazing tale. Bishop's Haugh I think?
As i've come to expect even after only 3 of your stories, you've done it again. amazing flow and descriptive content. 5 stars!
Another thrilling, sexy yet dark tale. Will there be a follow-up to this?