All Comments on 'Intrepid Pawns Ch. 03'

More evergreen forest please

Evergreen evergreen please!

definitely evergreen and welcome back

I really want to find out what happens next in Sea Slimes! That said, whatever you update will be a pleasure to read because you're just great at this stuff!

Focus on poor Okino! I hope you keep working on this :D

I wasn't sure I'd be seeing more of you to be honest, so glad to read your work again. I'd love to see what's happening to Okino so long as the main plot continues eventually. I don't mind a little bit of sidequesting.

As far as what comes next I love everything you put out so you wrote whatever you want to, I'll definitely be checking back more often as well. Good luck with your classes! Can't wait to see more!!

I can tell people are in favor of returning to the Evergreen Forest first, and so we probably shall. When this story resumes, Okino will definitely get some focus as well!

I'm currently, like, CRAZY swamped with other projects and the Editor program, so the next chapter of anything is going to be a little while, but I'm not dead and I do not want to get on any cart. :)

Love your work! I hope you write more of your reverse rape scenarios.

Sorry, what does "reverse rape" mean?

Did, uh, nobody ever point out that in the last scene that brist randomly became okino? Is editing articles on literotica a thing or are they locked?

Yes, I did get called out for it at the time! Literotica makes editing stories a horrible hassle, though. Sometimes it's just not worth it.