All Comments on 'Introducing the Latex Leopard'

But I love it! I hope this isn't the last we see of the Latex Leopard!

Well-written, humourous, and hot. Would love to see more of the Latex Leopard!

As a fan of the Genre, I can tell you (right now) that you've got WAY TOO MUCH "activity", that is just thrown in there... when there shouldn't be!

You "jump" from one plot, to the next (without any clear markers, that you've done so!)

You threw in extra characters, that're "unnecessary"! (a PRIME EXAMPLE: The "orgies", between the Technician, and "Collette"; "Portia", and "James"; and the subjugation of "Stallion" and "Starling", by the "Dominatrix" and the "Domme"!)

You need to "Centralize" your characters and your story so that readers won't give up on reading your stories!

Also... Just because she is their "Ringleader", doesn't mean she shouldn't "get her hands dirty!" (HAVE HER take command of a situation, instead of just "watching from the side-lines!")

There was "NO BUILD-UP!" "NO CLIMAX!" (to the story, that is!)

This is TRULY! a "HUGE DISAPPOINTMENT", for a SuperHero/SuperVillain Story!