by HR1983
Glad that it looks like the bad guys are going to get caught. Great writing. Thank you.
Don't make me wait long. I love this story I've read every chapter at least twice and have revisited it on occasion. Please keep this story going without a long delay between chapters. Love love love it!
No idea how this is going to play out but I need to read the rest. I wouldn't mind a bit darkness and suspense coming up.
Okay, I am now finished with my clumsy paw-work that pushes the wrong buttons and looses your comment, so this will be short. This story rocks. Even the bloody cops have this stupid 'glow of glory' around them.
I loved the scene where Mr. Creepy had her up on the slab. Very sexy and twisted, because of the brooding possibility that he knows what they're really there for. I true as Bob nearly soiled myself when they strolled out of the hotel. He's not going to try stroll back in the way they left, is he? Oh doG, I can feel in my bones...no, you know best. Sorry, it's just the stuff of dreams, this revenge trip. Do not, and I repeat, do not stop writing.