All Comments on 'Intrusion Ch. 02'

I love it! But please don't take 9 months to write the next chapter!!!

OMG! I am so happy you finally updated this story! I love the interaction between the two. I do hope they can finally meet and start a relationship (?) It's obvious he likes her and she likes him. Please let them meet face to face soon!!! Also please update this story faster! I'm dying to know what happens next ;)

This is so flipping good! I cannot wait for another chapter, seriously, you've got to keep going with this!

Love it! Keep it coming

Please make this a series please please please.

And fast!

Are you going to set up where it comes out like once every other week or something of that nature? I'm curious because I love it and want to be informed on when I can read it!

I'm happy you decided to give the series a try, because I've read the first one since it just came out and it's still one of my only two favorites up til now. I hope you continue this!

i must've been checking five times a day for an update. i dont want to rush you but this is just so good

My favourite story on literotica, easily. The way the characters interact is so intriguing. Please update this regularly if you can! Monthly basis or whatever works for your schedule because we all promise to tune in!

I love this story. It's so sexy, and a hot read. I have not read a good reluctance story in a while. Thanks for your work

Gosh I miss your writing! You're so in a class of your own. This series is so engaging and I'm with you for this journey.. I hope you've been well. Happy holidays KSC!

...also, I mean if you just "happened" to find the time and energy to update Mortal Kombat- I wouldn't hold it against you. 😉

This story is so unbelievably hot! Please I'm begging you to update this soon

i mean, he could try to be romantic to her to win her love and that gaze of sultry adoration he so craves. who knows, eh?

Requires an update hoho

I absolutely loved this story, it was instantly a new favorite. Please keep writing, I want to see where this goes!

This was amazing! I am so impressed and turned on by your writing. The characters are perfectly crafted and the tension between them is sizzling. Please continue to develop this story!

Would love another installment.

Oh please... please write more!! I need to hear more from you... this has me tore all to pieces.

PLZ UPDATE

i just luv ur stories. very detailed and extremely erotic. i usually don't read random intruder stories since i find it frightening. but ur reputation made me read it and boy its amazing. keep it up dear.

You are just the worst tease! Look at all of us begging for more! You know you have something really special here. Pleeeeease continue.

Really think there should be another chapter, please consider? I’m hooked and dying for more

Please consider another chapter!!

Start a Patreon and I’ll pay for more.

Is this story abandoned for good? Please please continue with this story

The story ia really great, I hope that you would consider to continue it. Anyways keep safe author.

I honestly feel a series could sprout from these 2 chapters, as the way the story is told suggests a deeper plot lies ahead. I couldn’t help laughing at the Smeagol reference, but please don’t take that as a negative; as I truly enjoy a good erotic story that contains a little humour! Also, I have to admit you fooled me for a moment, with the golden-eyed guy & his flattering hand-kiss; as I honestly thought it was our grey-eyed guy wearing coloured contacts! You can imagine my surprise when our “Lycan Eyed Intruder” was waiting to punish Miranda for her deviancy! I can’t help wondering if Miranda is going to continue flirting with “Golden-Eyes“ or if she will be forced to leave him in the dust. Please don’t leave the story here, as it would be tragic to abandon such a wonderful & promising story! 🥺❤️🙏

Fucking stupid!! Even after 2 parts the rapist is still masked

I hope you continue the story! <3

I SO wish you came back with new stories!! its been a decade, loved more of the "hell series" as I call them and more of this beauty. I'd love them to meet in person, please come back 🙏

I’ve literally never commented on a story before, but PLEASE continue this! These are my favorite types of CNC stories, where they turn romantic. I’m so curious who he is, I need more!