All Comments on 'Invasion'

Slightly strange, but kinda hot...actually very similar to another story I just read from another author.

Dear Ms. Burke, First word that comes to mind is 'cheeky'. Enjoyed the story and characters and your almost comedic approach to writing about something most women would consider assault. Thanks for the charming story which I awarded a five star rating and am now following your writing. Be safe, jntiques/john

Weird, but interesting. I haven't seen a concept like this before.

However - I never understand why some writers here go out of their way to emphasize race, and it always sort of ruins the mood for me. Like "nice white girl" is a kind of loaded way to start a story. Kinda feels like the author thinks WOC are less innocent :/ I know there are people with raceplay fetishes out there (not judging, I've got some weird kinks myself), but it doesn't seem to be the case for this story, so why include that?

You may not be aware but Literotica also published your story under someone else’s name and story line. Thankfully now removed.

Gotta focus on the race but wait, people who invade homes aren't all bad when they want to rape. Jesus christ.

I honestly wish I never discovered this site. There are so many absolutely stupid stories and dumb comments that praise them that I am forced to question just how stupid people actually are. 181 stories. Wtf. I wish I had the strength to leave this site once and for all and just ignore its pathetic existence. Sadly I am so determined to find something that simply does not suck a tail pipe that I come here daily. It has literally been maybe 1:200. The score system here is so fucking complete shitty that it's useless. The interface is rocketing into 2002 with the recent changes. What is laurel doing? Amateur is a step up from this trailer park trash shit fest. Yeah figure it out.

would have been three till the anal reared its very ugly head then its always going to be the lowest mark possible

He has the audacity to break in (without even trying to conceal his actual identity) & then when she lets him know firmly that he’s really crossed the line, he just breaks down crying?! I’m sorry, but I can’t help but laugh. I have Aspergers myself & when I was younger, I used to always break down in tears when anyone raised their voice to me (always people who didn’t understand my condition & always assumed that I knew better), but for a guy wanting to “get it on” to just start crying all over this poor woman & she didn’t even shout or threaten him with police! That’s just cringe, LOL. Makes me think he’s maybe a little bit touched in the head, TBH. 😅🤷‍♀️