All Comments on 'Inversion'

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SwifthawkSwifthawkabout 11 years ago
Very well written, but...

you kind of glossed over practically all the naughty bits, which is really why many of us are here. Other than that, enjoyed it, it's just a shame that you left too much to the imagination.

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