All Comments on 'Invisible'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

SBstories you may have spoiled this first time reader of yours. After finishing this read the words "deliciously wicked" first came to mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I absolutely LOVE stories like this one where a beautiful totally takes over a man's brain and life and makes him her slave. Despite a man feeling he is powerful and invincible a woman like Dr. Madsen knows how to remove his faux strength to force him to be in subjection to her, his forever Queen. Great story!

UnrighteousUnrighteousover 2 years ago

Well written, but pretty sure the person in the story would just 'cease to exist' after such an ' insight '.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i'm feeling a bit nervous about wishing i had a Dr. Madsen

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Simple Being, middle name Creative. Writer and artist with a penchant for themes of Female Dominance, Hypnosis, and Mind Control. My thoughts are my own except when they're not. I write micro-fiction, flash fiction, short stories, create femdom mind control captions and photo...