All Comments on 'Invisible Pt. 01 - The Ring'

A very yummy start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. Thank you!

My favorite part was when he had his way with Brit while Mike was banging her. I would definitely do the same and probably shoot my load in her mouth because I don't have to worry about my dick getting bitten off thanks to the gag.

I wish there was more interaction with Olivia on that night. Also being invisible outside at night, I would probably go to a strippers club and have fun with my invisibility there. I'm sure many hostesses won't expect what's coming. Although it's understandable that his main goal was Olivia from the very beginning. Looking forward on it.

Loved it! Looking forward to more!

Omfg five stars

Jennifer is obviously going to need to learn a lesson. Maybe he could strip her in public?

Putting a long term fantasy of mine into words, thank you!