All Comments on 'Invisible Schoolgirl'

Since this is part of a series, and this story is the second, maybe rename it? Something like

Magic High Ch1 - Perverted Shapeshifter

Magic High Ch2 - Invisible Schoolgirl

Or post the link to the other story, like this:

http://www.literotica.com/s/perverted-shapeshifter

Alternately, add the link and the reference to the other story as a parallel tale to this one.

The writing is well done. An observation that Laura's actions fall into the Non-consent/ Reluctance area (add tag), for she is not only looking, she's touching people without their prior permission.

Just suggestions.

Thank you for the advice. I intend to continue both stories, as I intend on Stephen and Laura to have more experiences. Since the stories are intertwined, though I edited this one to have a link to the other.

Damn to bad there wasn't a second chapter

Good one to start the story. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

This is worthy of at least one sequel

Fun and interesting premise with much promise; I would certainly enjoy additional chapters.

Great story. Would love to read part two.