All Comments on 'Invitation to Club "O"'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice Princess Bride link at the end.....

Wang4Wang4over 3 years ago
Wow

At the beginning, you said “no sex”’. I wasn’t sure what to think.

This story was extremely well written at a wicked pace! Great characters although a longer time to develop would have been fun. Still a wonderful story. Please keep sharing

Ed

Lector77Lector77over 3 years ago
Yes!

That was fun!

Thank you for good writing.

Kind regards,

A smiling reader

mwb123mwb123over 3 years ago
A new story for my list of favourites...

Great story, loved how Sherman had his hands in "everything" in that town!

Keep on writing (now going back to read your other stories!)

Sir Silverwolf

silentsoundsilentsoundover 3 years ago

This was weird and ridiculously fun!

Full marks.

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Loved It

Little more to say. 5 stars.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 3 years ago

Absolutely loved this, had some great funny moments would love a continuation or even as on going story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Enjoyed it but the ending should have included a reaction from the other 3 girls. Would have put it over the top.

tinfoilhattinfoilhatalmost 2 years ago

This was a great little story. Easily could be longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Entertaining and liked the Princess Bride shout out at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A lot of fun. Five stars.

JPB NOT BOB

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New story submitted for ON THE JOB 2023 in Romance. This one took me two years to finish. New meds seem to help. Still no cure, but there is hope for Alzheimer's treatment to slow down the disease.

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