by katienight
Gahh, i want more parts!! these are my shizz.. That was incredible- the story of her many admirers, people wanting her... there just was a lack of description of how this person differed from katie's smell, taste, etc. coz i actually looked for that (but was given once near the ending).
I believe you could have extended on what happed, maybe in the end it happens again and Alison finds out who it is?
I think you should add story line and expound on this story i would like to know who the mystery girl is and see how katie racts to all this. You are very good in my oppion and I would love to see more for alison and katie.
This story was very nice! I'm incredibly excited to find out who it really was that went down on Alison. Keep writing!