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WatercrazyWatercrazyabout 16 years ago
wow

Captivating story. I cant wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hmm...

Interesting...I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

HedgeWitchHedgeWitchabout 16 years ago
Ummmmm

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!! *lol*

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good

Great premise, but it needs editing. There were a lot of awkward sentences and grammatical errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
very good premise

although I agree the sentences are strangely structured I think it a good story, keep going!

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