All Comments on 'Ioana Musca Ch. 03'

You've introduced several characters, enough to sustain many more chapters, please continue the story.

Why did no one notice that she wasn't damaged from being shot? I like this story, but you were building her up to be this strong woman and then she just flakes out? It doesn't quite sit right for me but I'll keep reading it'll be interesting to see where you're going with this