All Comments on 'Iona Online Ch. 04'

An interesting story so far. Just needs a little TLC from an editor, if you don't have one already, to catch and fix things like the occasional typo, and possibly that little inconsistency regarding Michael's HP. It started at max 50, then when he leveled up his Stamina, it went to 100, but when he killed the spider queen later, it was at 75. Was that intentional?

I’ve enjoyed your story so far and I hope you continue to learn and write more for this story.