All Comments on 'Iona Online Ch. 05'

Well written story. Please keep it coming.

Is this the pace we can expect or is there a backlog of chapters? Either way, I'm enjoying it.

I'm getting the "stuck in a game" manga vibe. Is that the inspiration or is VRMMO novels just 99% Japanese? :)

Love this so far, but honestly, your chapters are way too short. Maybe keep readers waiting a wee bit longer and combine 3/4 chapters and release them as one Literotica post?

Thoroughly enjoying the series so far! I hope you keep going :)

Please!

I'm so glad you guys enjoy it! Sadly, this is backlog. I tried to post all 13 chapters I currently have all in one go, but for some reason they're being published one per day. My current word count is 46k and I'm going to be publishing chapter 13 soon and begin working on chapter 14.

It's more of a diversion from life to me. There's room for several improvements.