All Comments on 'Iona Online Ch. 08'

Great story, but unless your chapters get significantly longer, it's not worth keeping up with.

It’s good to have a little morsel of adventure every day. I say keep them short and regular. So many that write long epic and wonderful tales have readers hanging on for weeks. Good to have a quick fix.

Totally enjoying your series so far!

I hope it continues for many many more chapters!

This story has so much potential it's crazy, add more detail in your descriptions, paint Van Gogh-worthy images in our heads and please do make the story longer :)