All Comments on 'Irena's Shadow'

Very well written! I enjoyed it very much. I hope there gonna be a sequel ;)

I was mesmerized by your tale. A truly delightful romantic fantasy.

Wow, that was amazing. Beautifully written, I could almost feel every swing of the flogger. Please write more you have an awe inspiring talent. Don't keep us waiting too long please!

I really love your writing. You had such a slow, delicious build up to the story and put a touch of romance in with the heat. I really loved how he didn't force her into something she wasn't ready for, but then took her when she was.

Please write more. You are so talented.

Enjoyed the story. Very erotic in parts. I kept expecting it to turn into some sort of erotic horror story. What with the gothic mansion, the pictures in the basement, her dreams. I would like to see more. BTW, you could use a proofreader but, you did better than a lot of other Literotica writers.

This one really shines! Many of the stories on this site leave a lot to be desired (by a woman at least) this was fantastic!

Excellent story. Erotic, romantic and literary. Your sex scenes were mind blowing. I loved how the relationship developed without force. You will be writng more, right?

This was truly exquisite. Please write more!!!

Nicely written tale. I especially liked the way you described her thoughts and inner conflicts. The start reminded me strongly at the excellent work Hostile Takeover with less romance and more D/s twist thrown in. Encouraging first effort. My compliments.

Geniously written. I cant believe how excellent this story was. I kept wanting to see illustrations. It was all so vivid. I cant wait to read more of your work.

Thank you.

Thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks!

I don't entirely know what to say. I'm still processing the whole experience. Wait, that's it! You didn't just write a story, you created an experience. Well written, and a great story. Thank you.

I rarely comment but this deserves praise. Loved it!!

After reading lit for 8 months, this is the BEST story i have come across,You have a talent for writing, knowing how to portray the characters and building the story. This story is amazing, i cant express that enough, as a young aspiring writer, you have inspired me, not only that you gave me 3 wonderfull orgasms, afterwards i lay still touching myself, ;)

That was amazing. It was good storytelling, even before the actual erotica... I loved the characters. Off to see what else you have in your repertoire!

One of the best stories I have read. Look forward to your next submission,hope it will not be too long!!!

excellent story, fantastic characters and great dialogue!

very very very stimulating!!

Absolutely premium stuff - articulate, suspenseful, and SEXY!

I really liked "reaper" as well

You have a real talent. The character and storyline development were extraordinary and the erotic was superb. Your readers hope that you will write more... and soon. You are a very pretty liberal and this old hardline conservative hopes that the author has some feelings in the direction enjoyed by her first subject.

Damn! More of Antonio and Irena! More other stories! 'Bout

the best damn mix of BDSM and romance I've read.

I'm new to Literotica, and so far, of all the stories I've read on this site, this one is the first that is truly a mix of literature and erotica. Excellent work.

This was absolutely incredible. I feel like I actually know the characters now, and I totally fell in love with Antonio during this. Please keep writing! WOW!

that was the best bdsm sory i've ever read I hope you make a sequel to it

Really good the way it gained momemtum while maintaining the mystery. Great climax (er) ending! I look forward to your future work.

oh how I wish I had found your writing much earlyer, it is absolutly superb! please keep writing and I deamand more of Irena and Soto!

Oh my gods. I don't even know what to say. Just... wow. Please keep writing!

I wasn't sure where this was going but I enjoyed where it went. Good character development, good plot, well written. Thank you!

Holy crap, PLEASE keep writing! Better yet, publish and become a famous author so I can buy all your books! This was sooo good, much better than a lot of already published romance/erotic writers. PLEASE WRITE WOMAN!!

This was one of the best romantic bdsm stories I've read and I really hope you'll be sharing more of your talent with us.

Was not sure what to think at first but it held me spell bound and wishing for 'release' for Irena... and then OMG!!!! WoW you have to continue their story please! She is one very lucky girl to find a DOM who is both So demanding and yet so loving!!!!! Please keep the story going!

Jesus.. this is the most detailed and intense story I have ever read. Oh my goodness, you deserve a 200 rating!

Very, very well written. The psychological development of Irena was splendid, as well as the ultimate BDSM action. You subtly showed the needs of each of the character, and the caring fulfillment of these needs by the other. Soto's infinite patience, as Irena discovers desires is lovely. The passion and caring here is gratifying.

Thank you for a lovely read! I have read the second, as well, and it is delightful, as well.

Susan

I loved the characters. Irena was beautiful and Soto was compassionate. I could see myself rooting for them, hoping they would use the L word at the end. And I think Irena does love Soto and vice versa...it was romantic as much as it was arousing.

I fell head over heels in love with these two. She's lovely and he's mysteriously attractive. You really managed to touch the sub side of my normally very dominant self. If I was her I'd definitely come back!

Beautiful character-building. I was completely absorbed. And aroused...

One of the best stories I ever read !!

Amazing! The sexiest part of this story is the unyielding focus on Irena's happiness and consent.

Well written, good character buildup, excellent descriptions. Five stars, without a doubt.

Love how you developed these two characters, a most perfect fantasy that makes me want to meet my own Soto... =)

absolutely loved it and have loved ur stories of irena and soto though i read them completely out of any type of order lol.

This was one of the most incredibly arousing stories that I've read on Literotica...and I've read my fair share. It makes me yearn for a Soto of my own...

What can I say that hasn't already been said. Breathtaking, heart rending and oh so sexually satisfying! Thank you.

Perfect Saturday afternoon read.

Thanks so much.

Have you considered self-publishing? If not you should.

You are amazing. This had sexiness And depth. Thank you so much

God dammit, this should have a part two! Pretty please? *goes off to take a cold shower*

I was engrossed in the story up to the end.

Amazing story... loved it...!

I love stories like this, and you write it like you have written a thousand of them. I would suggest an editor, but the momentum of the story helped make the typos less noticeable. Very good story. Keep it up!

This screams for a part two!!#

Welcome to the site- you have made a fine entrance. Considered, literate and sexy.

I look forward to your next work.

I loved this. Would be great with oart two at the same time s perfact on its own wtg

This is really grat!!! I think one of the best storys I ever read! Thank you for this! Please write more!!!

Luxuriously detailed. I want to be Sir. Like that's going to happen. Your first story on Lit. but not your first story. I like the tie of a this writer and other authors, books and library's. hopefully you are rewarded with creating a story full of descriptions of physical details as well as emotional ones, Irena's climax, for example. Interesting that willingly this can be accomplished, but is so much more fun for me to take it. This might not be accurate, but taking her is what happened.

I thoroughly enjoy your stories, how ever I started this from chapter three. I do wish Lit. would list stories by date of entry, or have an option.

Looking forward to reading more of your adventurous fantasies. (are you describing your orgasm here?) A fantasy of mine.

Thank you.

This has been the best story I have ever read,Please continue writing!

First, this is by definition non-consensual. Second, Irena accepts her situation with far too little fight; she is written with far too little spirit, after the first page. I stopped on page two out of disgust.

What is with the rape stories.. uhh well my search continues