All Comments on 'Iris Ch. 02'

by Clariceestonian

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minxxxkittenminxxxkittenalmost 8 years ago
Intrigued

This chapter definitely interest me more into your story, excited to read the next chapter, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Gotta ask this

How old is King William?

ClariceestonianClariceestonianalmost 8 years agoAuthor
More to come

Hi guys,

Chapter 3 will be posted within the week and there will be lot of character building (which will address King William's age) and of course more 'interactions' between Iris and William (if you know what I mean).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love this!

Good so far!

ClariceestonianClariceestonianalmost 8 years agoAuthor

Ch 3 has just been submitted and is pending approval. It is longer than I thought it would be so I hope you guys enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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I'm guessing that as the age of both the king and the author. Only an imbecile would be surprised at her offering herself ..... after shes already been given to him. Broken plot, juvenile writing.

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