All Comments on 'Irkutsk Ch. 21'

Obviously english is your second language but to think you have another 20 chapters that i am truly glad not to have read, well fuck me. this is tripe and i have never used that word in my life!

Why do people write storys with continuations when the first chapter is shit?

20 fucking chapters ! cut mycock off and dip it in ink, write with it, your story is gold and must be told.

What @anon didn't understand was that writing this story is a way for the writer to get used to write in english. Of course that all parts are almost the same about a fantasy. 21 parts, as could have been 1, 3 or 50...I read the part 1 and go immediatly to part 21...it's not a bad story...Only shouldn't be LW, but fetish or some other category...

just ran across this chapter and went back reading several that I missed. Thanks for sharing your efforts and letting us all enjoy your creation.

just amazed me, the way you managed to make each chapter unique & intriguing. Completely captivated me despite not being my usual category. Please don't stop now, I can't wait to hear how they like Australia.

This is the case here. It doesn't mean a bad writer. It just mean bad writer in English ! 1* !